Without You

It's about My Man

I am me 

You are you

My world is yours

How can I live without you. . .without you. . .

I don't laugh

I don't sing, without you

I can't breathe without you

Sometimes my world crumbles down

All I do is look around

And wonder how I will make it without you

How do I live?

Without you. . .

I know your light

Sometimes I'm dark

I often wonder how this will work.

I can't rest

I don't want to fight

All I need is You and I

Author's Note

This was inspired by Without You (it was covered by Glee, so I have no idea who orginally sung this. but props to Lea Michele who has a beautiful voice)

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Great job. :) I really liked this one. ^_^

[Aly]

Thank you!

[The Invisible Girl]

Great poem!! :) Keep up the great work!

[Aly]

Thank you! :D

[teardrop]

very relatable, nice job!

[Aly]

Thank you so much :)

[David the writer]

Good job! It's relatable, and it gets a point across. Nice, job

[Aly]

Thank you! Much appericated :)

[David the writer]

Np, keep it up!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Love at its worst when not even the simple things of life, the things that enable us to continue existing seem possible without the one you love. Great work.

[Aly]

Thank you! Much appericated :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Lovely poem that tells me your fella is one lucky man to be so loved. I have just found a love so strong and it is a wonderful place to be. Without you is a haunting melody written and performed by a Scandinavian artist Harry Nilsson
You should watch this it makes me weep.
http://m.youtube.com/#/watch?v=vAX1rkdzUH4&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DvAX1rkdzUH4&gl=GB

[s y e]

Thanks for sending the link to the song! I will surely watch it. Its been bugging me who sings it haha.

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet poem.

[Aly]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[Aly]

:)

[Steven]

wanted to change "Sometimes I'm dark" to "But baby I'm dark." Like this, though.

[Aly]

ok...