Inspired by the song "Barely Breathing"

Inspired by the song Barely Breathing, if you've read "Dear Blue Eyes," it's about this guy. Also this is a "song" but it can also be a poem.

I see what your doin'

Messin' me up with those blue eyes 

They won me before

Will they will me again?

I'm always torn 

With I'm feeling and why

No one ever asks me how the change is

No one understands my mind

Or even how I'm feelin'

I believed your smile

for a second

I don't know why I lie to myself

Imaging you care

Your my own Scarlet Letter

Sewn onto my heart

The freedom doesn't last long

My mind betrays my heart

I use to be so sure

Will I ever change?

I shouldn't see your face

But sometimes I can't look away.

Author's Note

Just to let everyone know I have moved on from Mr.Dear Blue Eyes, but he gave me alot of inspiration and well I do have some papers about him. Oh and the song "Barely Breathing" I have no idea who it's by, but it was covered by Glee. Props to Cory Monteith "Finn" and Darren Criss "Blaine" who did an awesome job with this song.

Reviews

[scripted]

love this write

[Aly]

Thanks so much! :D

[Robin]

C'est le temps de l'amour ~ live, love, write ~

[Aly]

Thank you! Much appericated! :D Check out "The Pizza Dilemma (1 & 2)

[Steven]

I imagine this with a twinge of the South. Slightly heartbreaking.

[Aly]

"with a twinge of the South" ? maybe it's because it's morning for me. But what exactly are you saying?

[Steven]

Southern musical style.

[Aly]

ok then

[s y e]

Very very nice my dear! :-D
Noodle likes :P Haha

[Aly]

Thank you :D

[s y e]

Welcome!