I Miss You

I hadn't heard from My Man in awhile and this was the frustration and sadness I felt.

I wonder how your doing?

Are you thinking of me?

You really aren't talking

You haven't told me how you are

No letter not even a card.

I'm standing still

and feeling time past me by

I'm waiting for some kind of response

There isn't much to do

I kept myself busy

But at night I'm always thinking of you

No matter you are

No matter where I am

I'm ususally always thinking of you.

I am barely breathing

As I go on through the days

Whenever I saw your picture

I tried to look away 

You were the sun

You are my air

I wonder how often 

I tried to tell myself "Act like you don't care"

I can't do it. 

Not when I'm in love and missing you.

Author's Note

I was very frustrated and sad at the time when I wrote this.
I hadn't heard from My Man in awhile.
But I have now. :)
But hope everyone likes it.

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I liked this very much..and a lot of people that are in love can relate to this so easily xD It's very sweet and I like how it flows. I do see one little mistake, i think you left out "where" when you say "No matter you are" other than that its a very beautiful piece.

Great Job

[Aly]

Thank you

[Carolann Dowsett]

It's lovely sad and full of longing for the one your love.

[Aly]

:) very much so. But I got a christmas card from him about like...2 maybe almost 3 weeks ago! Finally heard from him! :D

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh how frustrating for you. I hope he returns to you soon.

[Aly]

It was so hard at first, but it's getting easier. If I'm right he should be coming home sometime May of 2014

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh wow such a long time. That would be very hard.

[Aly]

Indeed but it's alright. Totally worth it when he comes home and he's doing a good thing as well. I support him :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

That's good hun. Your a faithful girl and he's a lucky man :)

[Aly]

:) Thank you. I certainly hope me and him can be together when he gets home. Right now we aren't official but we're good friends :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

ohhhh wow sounds like a story in itself :) I really hope it works out for you :)

[Aly]

:) It's a long beautiful story :) I hope it works out as well.

[Dan Kim]

Great emotion through a display of wistful love.

P.S. First Line, your should be you're ?

[Aly]

Thank you and yeah the first line should be that. Haha. My mistake. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[tedefroberts]

I certainly can empathize with your frustration, as expressed in this piece. You successfully avoided the overstated verbiage usually associated with these emotions.
I liked the work very much.

[Aly]

Thank you :)
Please read "No One Will Ever Love You Like I Do" and "You"

[Astrid Wanye]

Love is such a hard thing, and this poem expresses it beautifully! Love does crazy things to us! =) nice job!

[Aly]

Thank you! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

[David the writer]

It's always hard to write these kind of peices, atleast for me. You always miss your sgnificant other, and you try NOT to think about them, but you really can't stop yourself from thinking about them. It's impossible, no matter how hard you try, and writing these poems usualy make it worse, atleast for me.

ANYWAYS, great job conveying emotions. Nice flow, and definelty well written. Great job!

[Aly]

Exactly! Writing is the only reason why I haven't died from keeping all my pain inside. Thank you! Means a lot.

[David the writer]

Np, thank you for sharing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice sad piece honestly reflecting your love.

[Aly]

Thank you.