Smitten

I know a band you like

I listen to them.

When I listen to them, I think of you. 

When I see your face my heart beats faster.

I feel so smitten

I have a goofy smile.

When you listen to music

I wish I could feel what you feel when you listen to them.

I wish I could hear your thoughts, on how you relate to the songs.

Hey hey.

Why can't I just let go?

Why do I have to fall?

Why do I have to be smitten...sadly it was from the very start...

Author's Note

just something I wrote

Reviews

[Muse]

Simple in execution and very original. I enjoyed reading this. :))

[Aly]

Thank you.
Much appericated.

Aly

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

and i hope its Aerosmith:)

[Aly]

haha

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

or is it

[Aly]

...is it what?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Aerosmith?

[Aly]

I don't know if he likes Aerosmith.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

matters if you do:) lol or else....i should gues Meatloaf

[The Nude Writer]

Awesome :) Really well written :)

[Aly]

thank you

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

I can really relate to this...wonderful job again. You're poetry really seems to speak to people, but I think this one especially has the most connections with me, anyways. Awesome!

[Aly]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Much appericated. I too have noticed my poetry really speaks to people. Maybe it's because I'm so easily relatable. Much appericated :)
Aly

[Aly Jones]

This is something that I can relate to, especially now. Thank you. :)

It was a silly little poem with little depth or meaning, but it was cute and enjoyable. :)

[Aly]

Thank you haha. Yeah this wasn't like my others but thanks

[Aly Jones]

You're welcome. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

silly but a gift to remember

[Michael Stevens]

Very good poem!

[Aly]

thank you :)

[michael.c.m]

The center section - about the music. An exploration of emotion, hearing thoughts. I like the idea. Good little piece.

[Aly]

thanks. I know it's not my best. But you know, just something I wrote. You should read "Fallen"

[michael.c.m]

I did. Even the tiniest thought can be as large as a universe of emotion.

[Aly]

thank you