A Lovely Sort of Things

A Lovely Sort of Things

Fingers trace the lines in your skin
So delicate, so intricate
Laughs donated so freely

Memories spattered with expectations of grandeur
Distant stars so stable
Conducting our hands

Ears so cluttered with a murmured tune
a cry in the dark beckoning our psyche to combine

Eyes so misted with a sheath of infatuation
a soothing disturbance from being

Embraced taut, grazing along the rinds
blanketed by flesh

The sweltering summer ferocity
a trifle of the reaction within

 

Author's Note

Reviews are ALWAYS appriciate. I'm working hard to make my poems up to par so any review is HIGHLY appriciated and welcome =D

Reviews

[Clockwork]

You are doing a really good job "making your poetry up to par." I think your lines have this delicate veil over them, a gently and sensual curtain of night. I think that this is a great way to describe love, and the small parts that we can compare to small assorted gifts. Well done.

[Lyrical Love]

Expressive and bold!!!

The sweltering summer ferocity
a trifle of the reaction within

Nicely done!

[Bran the Broken]

tersely but beautifully worded. i like the symbolism and underlying sense of sensuality

[Kelley]

well I liked the heat of it all. It kind of reminded me of a hot sumer day and a love that one never forgets.
Anyway great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[An owl on the moon]

Beautifully expressive, sensual, and soft, you build a sense of expectation... of love... of desire... and so perfectly end with a note of the true depth of the love... so powerful!