Serenity

Tomorrow I shall wake to the dying sun
Its red blossoms painting the sky in blood
The pink blooms into violet blue
As I lay here right beside you

The night seems darker thank black velvet silk
The silver orb of the stars like spilt milk
And the milky moon the shinning glass
As they all twinkle like the past

Dark clouds swiftly descended by us
Their bodies a puffy white and a plus
That they're outline in a silvery hue
A romantic ending for two

So now I close my peaceful golden orbs
A sigh from my lips at your cute little snore
Your heartbeat reminding me of our love
Like that of the setting red sun

Reviews

[Becca]

This is incredibly descriptive, and paints a vivid picture of two people in an evening setting.
Nice!

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