O love, My love

A true live account

Blessed I am to have you here
To touch your apple cheeks dear
To feel the warmth of your true love
And cherish all here, down or above
I am so lucky, to have the lucky charm
Of nuptial beauty, charismatically warm
O love, my love! You are what I'd convert
This world may end, death comes,so what?

Reviews

[Lungile I Mtsweni]

The poem explores the themes of love, gratitude, and devotion
The imagery is vivid and sensory, with phrases like "apple cheeks dear", "warmth of your true love", and "nuptial beauty, charismatically warm". These images evoke a sense of tenderness, intimacy, and joy
Overall, this is a lovely poem that captures the essence of romantic love. With some refinement, it has the potential to become an even more powerful and evocative piece.