The Moment

Together

yes my heart did race

as she touched my arm softly

the moment was right

Reviews

[Chirag Kumar]

That is the power of love. Nice poem Willard :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Chirag. Appreciate the visit and kind words.

[wordman]

just the touch of your hand,my heart you still command

[Willard Wells]

Absolutely WM. Thank you for taking time to visit and review my work.

[wordman]

my pleasure willard

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there is no better indicator to that 'right time' than a gentle touch... nice senryu, Willard, so full of possibilities :D

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for visiting and commenting and I also liked the open ended possibilities. :)

[mattavelli]

Ooh la la. Nice one, Willard. :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much and I hide the meanings a bit more than you. Hahaha

[JayceeC]

Wow, this is so innocent and then in five syllables you made it wholly carnal...of course the moment could be anything thT is special or causes anxiety even..so ignore my hypersexual brain, if it was not meant as such.

[Willard Wells]

You caught what I think others have missed. I left it for the eye of the beholder, but you went where the words were truly going. Thank you for your time and comments.

[ANTO]

delightful amuse bouche for the brain here Will. Very romantic my friend.
Well penned.

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Anto. Late in the evening and it was there after a day of emptiness. Appreciate the visit.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This crisp senyru made me recollect such a moment. That second takes your breath away for an instant and bliss flows through your veins.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you John for your words and taking time to review my work.

[KWP]

it must be love,
love love

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[Willard Wells]

It could be less, but for me you know so well it is love, love, love. Good call.