Final Curtain (Senryu)

Final time

 Final Curtain

as final light fades

life is viewed as it has passed

no lies or regrets

final curtain call

closing out past and future

moments that are not

ones you left behind

cleaning the mess you left can

only shake their heads

Reviews

[Valentine]

You did very well with this style of poetry. I just am not very good at it. Nice flowing write. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words, but I am not good at it either, just lucky.

[Robert]

No regrets, love that. There are times when I wish I could have done something different, but having a regret is such a waste of time . Well done Willard.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Robert. No matter what in the end it is what it is. Good or bad. Thanks for the review.read moreThank you Robert. No matter what in the end it is what it is. Good or bad. Thanks for the review.

[jeannemarie coulter]

ones you left behind
cleaning the mess you left can
only shake their heads

the last very powerful...people often look upon the life of others with only wonder...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for taking time to read my words and comment.

[Perkele.7885]

I sure did, I did it; My Way!

[Perkele.7885]

and as I close the final curtain
to think I did all that
of which I am certain
oy vey, oy vey, oh yes indeed, I most certainly did, do it My Way!
For what is a man, la, la,la,la,la

[Willard Wells]

Thanks Ray for the roaring approval of departing on you own terms.

[Perkele.7885]

Thank you for the stage opportunity!