Sleep

sleep comes to heavy

eyes as the stars shine brightly

in a moonlit sky

Reviews

[Valentine]

For me the beauty of the night keeps my eyes open. Nice write. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Thanks K, I appreciate the visit and kind words

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

So true, Willard. Thank you for sharing this poetry. Well done. :) Rudi

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Rudi for stopping by my small piece of the world and reading my words.

[KWP]

oh how I can relate to this - when my head hits the pil,oe - I fall asleep - I also love my bed very much :) nicely written my friend X

[Willard Wells]

Thank you and when my head hits the pillow my brain fires up. I always hope for a short adventure and then sleep, but some nights that is not to be and the adventure goes on far too long. Thank you again for taking time to visit my small part of the world. Peace Out!

[Perkele.7885]

Will, I do not know when sleep comes to me, but I am glad when ever that it finally arrives. Nice poem. Send me some sleep, will ya? Sleep for water?

[Willard Wells]

I have my own sleep issues. take care of yourself. hahaha. Glad you liked it. My sleep does not come as gently as this verse might indicate. Thanks for stopping by.

[Riv]

Sleep is so hard to grab hold of for me. Enjoyable poem Pen on!

[Willard Wells]

Sleep is a elusive master and I have to work at sleep for an adequate amount of time. Thanks for the visit and commenting.

[JayceeC]

If only this was about me! Seems like I'm wired tonight. But I like the small bit of rhyme you've given this which makes it fall firmly into western haiku. It has a totally natural feel though--It was meant to have the rhyme no forcing was necessary.

[Willard Wells]

It was suppose to be a bit of a love poem starting with sleep with my love, but this was what happened as my brain took control of my thoughts. Thank you for visiting and commenting.

[JayceeC]

Those unruley brains have a will of their own. If you ever find a way to over ride you could make an easy million.