x- Fantasy -x

Love, pretty love, of the heart; out of all things always remains above. Sweet, never ending love

Shivers down my spine,
I drink in your love like wine.
I lose myself in the drunkenness of passion,
I give u a taste of my addicted passion.
Intense burning, undying wildness,
Contemplated femininity breaking down to,
extreme exasperation of delicate romances.
Grabbing and holding and kissing and cuddling,
a pleasurable silence completes the abandoned room.
Pulsating moves thrown on one another,
Breathtaking work pleases one another.
Indulgence in a fantastical fantasy,
Swearing cute names in cute ways,
An innocent naughtiness washes over.
Falling in love completely,
mildly attacking lips,
lightly placed hands on hips,
words exchanged in short moments,
smiles taken as pleasure full tokens.
Hours passing by menacingly,
dark hours falling in dully,
bodies parted hesitantly,
mere affection exchanged,
and then left wanting for more again.


-aki.

Reviews

[VishalKukreti]

With what i just read, I can't believe you studied in TIHS. I'll have to say you never seize to amaze people with your words... And i'll rate this one 200 on my behalf of my sister too... :)

[nitin.s]

In awe of your work sis ! :)

[Amit]

Nice stuff Aki... Ur writing skills are awesome.. Keep up the good work :)

[Girish Mehta]

excellent - for a guy like me i had to read it twice though - keep it up

[Dushyant Thadani]

Bhumika you are seriously a psyched poetess... This write has got a rhyme scheme, a wildly erotic sexual fantasy... Great job!!! Totally loved it :)

[ALEW]

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just wow