Untold Lies

You try to find a way to tell But all the ways you find lead straight to hell Caught up in your own suffocating lies Hiding the truth between well written lines As long as no one sees the real you But you're the only one you need to remain true to Nevermind the tears you cry You're living with an untold lie No one cares for the pain inside So why would you even bother? The reflection in the mirror shows what others want to see You're facing someone you never wanted to be Killing yourself with the truth written on your wrist The person underneath the mask doesn't even exist Nevermind the tears you cry You're living with an untold lie No one cares for the pain inside So why would you even bother?

Author's Note

I could use some advise, so tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

Anger, resentment and that 'you got what you had coming for you' sorta feel comes out in this poem.
I might be interpreting wrong. Either way, it's a great poem.
The rhyming scheme is really well used.
"Caught up in your own suffocating lies
Hiding the truth between well written lines" - I really liked this part, the rhyme was slick and smart.
Spelling mistake - "The person underneath the mask doesn't even excist"
excist should be exist.
Otherwise great write, you did it really well.

Yours truly,
cloud6