The Reaper's Warning

Turn your head, look at fright.

The hurt, the pain, caused by the night.

Things that your unable to explain.

Things that disrupt your madness and vain.

You take the time to see the end.

 Wishing, you were given time to mend.

Turn your head, look at me.

It's your death, you'll surely see.

Change, sweet darling,change.

 

Reviews

[Paladin4life]

Interesting read and quite haunting as well. Death can be either be the beautiful transformation from this world of suffering into the joys of heaven with Christ Jesus, or it can be the horrifying slip into a burning hell. Either way death well come for us. The only thing I see that needs to be changed is the your in line three should be your'e. This is a creative and well done write. Good work and God bless!

[The Ugly Rose]

It's very dark, but at the same time, the lines are just kind of drawing me in. I very much like how it's worded and arranged on the page.

Well done :)