It's All in Letting Go

Let go! they cry
I can only hold tighter.
Caring words of warning thrown in front of my eyes.
If only I could see.
Love has blinded me.
Let go! They cry they plead me more
I can't! I scream
I'll never let you go
He starts to slip
I scream and plead
I beg and I cry
My knuckles getting whiter
my grip getting tighter
nothing lasts forever he cries.
hands slip
love plunges
down
down
down
I retreat
eyes red
lips sewn shut
let go they plead
its all in letting go...

 

Reviews

[Galyen]

very nice i liked the emotion used in it thnks for entering

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wonderfully done... the emotions you captured are fantastic... glad it was sent ot me to read.

[Tas]

This is great...I LOVE THIS SERIOUSLY...wow, and the fact that is figurative makes that much better (it is figurative, right, lol) this is just a great description of a process than nobody really wants to go through, i really like this.

[Butterflymom]

This was a very heartfelt, and touching piece. This was very well done, and well stated in such a concise way.