Be The One

Be The One

A Poem by Brandon Dunbar

 

Be the one

That I need

Be the one

To cherish me

Be the one

That makes me smile

Be the one

To go the extra mile

Be the one

That I’ll kiss

Be the one

That i'll never miss

 

© 2008 Brandon Dunbar


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Awww, you suck. Just kidding!!! :) I love this one, sigh. It's so simple, yet says so much, like all of your poems. It's really a pretty one. I hate to use that word, but it is. It made me go "Awwww" out loud. Good job! ;)

Posted 17 Years Ago


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 Added on April 8, 2008

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Brandon Dunbar
Brandon Dunbar

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..