One

A Poem by Brandon Dunbar

One last time

One last day

One last sun

One last ray

One last chance

One last fear

One last breath

One last tear

One last gasp

One last sigh

One last kiss

One last goodbye

© 2008 Brandon Dunbar

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Seriana

Wow!!!!!! Ok, this was really good! I like it, alot. Very poignant. Great way to drive home the message of goodbye. You're getting really good at this. ;)

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on April 8, 2008
Last Updated on May 9, 2008

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Brandon Dunbar

Phoenix, AZ

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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..