Violence

Violence

A Poem by Brandon Dunbar

What is the point of violence?

You have to ask yourself and wonder.

There are shootings everyday, most with no

reason. Violence is un-needed and yet considered

Necessary to some, and out of the question to

Others. The way I see it, you punch somebody, they

Fall to the ground, and you get what out of that? Is it

The fact that you are to good to use words to settle

Problems, or you just don’t know how to use them?

That is one of many things people should think about

Before they, get in that car, pull the trigger, bring back a

Fist, or anything else out of pure anger. Now I will ask

You again, what is the point of VIOLENCE?

© 2008 Brandon Dunbar


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Good message and great concepts, some of the grammar problems were jarring but nothing that can't be fixed.

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Added on April 11, 2008
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Brandon Dunbar
Brandon Dunbar

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..