Alone

 

Sitting, staring
Looking at nothing
Nowhere to go
No friends to speak of

You cry for help
No one can hear you
Your parents see
And yet, they say nothing

All you ever wanted
Was to be accepted
And given a chance
But your hope is fading

Now you are stuck
In a world of loneliness
Where all you needed
Was not to be alone

Reviews

[Seriana]

Oh, that's so sad! Hurtful and alone. It's funny because I was trying to write a poem about loneliness yesterday and it didn't work. But you got it. That was perfectly simple. Only thing I would suggest would be possibly rewording some of the verses. I'll send ya a message and let you know what I mean. Kinda like what we talked about yesterday. Another good one!

[Pinky]

Yet again great write... I like the part

All you ever wanted
Was to be accepted
And given a chance
But your hope is fading

Good job!