Away

 

Into the wide open

Flowing down the splashing current

Bouncing and paddling along

 

Thinking of nothing

Dreaming about everything

Nobody around to bug me

 

Wandering eyes

Looking at beautiful Mother Nature

Beautiful sight to see

 

Continuing down the trail

Coming to the end of stream

Felt great to just get away

Author's Note

Something different from what I normally do. Let me know what ya think.

Reviews

[she makes me weird]

"thinking of nothing
dreaming about everything"

I love these lines. This is a very simple piece yet written very well. I like it.

[Seriana]

Ahhh, very nice! Sort-of a peaceful, lazy day trek down the river is what it reminds me of. Like you're laying on an inner-tube floating down the river with the sun in your face. It made me smile. Good job!