Gone

 

Staring at the door

Waiting for the call

Hoping for something

Will this be the time after all?

 

Been waiting for a while now

Hoping with all your might

That you will come back

Will this be the night?

 

Weeks go by

Without a word

You have not been seen

Nor have you been heard

 

Desperation sets in

Hope begins to perish

Will you ever come back?

Don’t you realize that it’s you we cherish?

Author's Note

Completely re-done, let me know what ya think.

Reviews

[julian3]

A good job of capturing that 'hanging in suspense and apprehension' moment that we have all had to face, usually more than once.

[Ale Blevins]

great write! i love the lines

"Weeks go by

Without a word

You have not been seen

Nor have you been heard"

i can really relate