Affect Me

 

They stare

What’s wrong with me?

They talk

What have I done?

They laugh

What am I, a f*****g joke?

They Judge

Should I care?

They belittle

Should it affect me?

They threaten

They don’t even know me!

Author's Note

Not sure on this one. Just an idea I had and jotted it down. Let me know what ya think.

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

So there is simply only one word for this. AMAZING! Well, im sure i could find plenty more words to describe it but oh my gosh... i LOVED IT!! i mean.. i can relate to it so much. Its wonderful to find a poem that when you read you nod your head in agreement and say "yeah, ive been there." I loved how you wrote it and how palpable the emotion in it was. :-D Brilliant write.


-Court

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

You could really take this and expand with it. I suggest that one day when you are bored and nothing is coming to mind, to reread this and see if you can add to it, or make a story from it. This is a great idea and it is one of the best points. It really doesn't matter what people think, but no one sees it that way anymore.

[Broken.]

Ooo, I like it very much.
I can very much relate to it ironically.
Excellent. :]

[Kaitlyn]

i love this and i can relate to what you are trying to say.

Great write!!