I'll Be There

 

When you feel lonely

Or when you are scared

Just call my name

And I’ll be there

To be the one

That you need

Take care of you

When you can’t go to sleep

When you’re sick

Or when you’re sad

I’ll be the one

To make you glad

That I am here

Always for you

And you’ll know

That this is true

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Seriana]

Awww, another perfectly simple piece from you. There is a gentleness in your writing that I find so calming. I find myself wanting to wrap up in the poem and find comfort. That was just beautiful. Good on ya!

[Sarah]

Aw, this was really cute. It was simple & fun to read. I liked the rhyme too. Good job!

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This really sounds like a spin off of some song/poem that I have read before. I am not saying that you stole this or anything, but it does sound so familiar. If it is possible, I would suggest maybe rewriting, but only if you could. If you can't, then this is fine. I wish I knew what poem/song it was that sounded like this so that I could show you what I meant.

[Ale Blevins]

great work! i wish i had someone like that it just makes me over flow with memories! GREAT work

[Picture of Poetry]

Grand work! It's great. The emtion of care is flooded through out it all. It has a wonderful flow to it and the words go together wonderfully. Amazing work.