Rising Star

 

I look through your eyes

I see who you are

Like an unwrapped gift

Like a rising star

 

You capture us all

With all your words

More exotic than most

Some I’ve never heard

 

Every word flows

From beginning to end

Rolls off the tongue

Like leaves in the wind

 

How does one entice us

The way you do

From one poem to the next

With words ever so true

 

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Woah! NEW FAVORITE!!! You are so amazing. I loved how it flowed and i ALWAYS love it when the poem title is somewhere in the poem and it totally was!!! GREAT JOB BABE!!! :-D


-Courtney

[Pinky]

Yet again good job....!!!!! :D

[Seriana]

Oh that's so cool! I LOVE this one! Did you just write it? See, you're becoming way too good at this, and I'm in a funk, so not fair. Very good! And the title, captures it perfectly. Great job!