Problems

 

 

Problems in life

Arrive unexpected

Work or at home

If your not being respected

 

Problems you have

That cannot be solved

Easily or quickly

But simply evolve

 

You try and you try

To find a way out

It seems the harder you try

The louder you want to shout

 

So now you sit

With no hope in sight

You tried and you tried

Now you call it a night

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kaitlyn]

I loved this and can relate to this. It was a great write because it captures the true emotions people have when they have problems. Good job and thanks for the review

[Pinky]

Its short and sweet and to the point... great wrtite... Awesome form!

[forfila]

I like the poem, but when your not respected for reasons you know to be untrue, you must pursue and never call it a night. I like the flow. Nice piece.

[Wildfleour]

Sometimes it's good to call it a night - literally. Problems seem so much smaller in the morning!

A good poem - we all have been there.