One Night

 

Welcome to Starbucks

Can I get you anything?

How about you and me

Without all the strings

 

We’ll get some drinks

Perhaps something to eat

Go down to the beach

Get the sand under our feet

 

Followed by a night on the town

Do whatever we feel

Anything we desire

Knowing we will never be real

 

It’s now getting late

We’ve seen all the sights

Who would of thought

A lifetime of fun, all in one night

Reviews

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

your rythmn is excellant i feel as if you really are talking to me. sure i'd go with you :o). i like the simplicity and use of rhyme here. this brought me back to the beach so nice

[Jazmyne]

great write...the flow was amazing! i like how you started off the poem with starbucks. this would be a fun day with someone. thanks you for sharing i really liked reading this.

[Rita]

Starbucks :P

[Pinky]

Nice wrtie! The form is awesome and so is the content is great too! Good job!

[Seriana]

Brandon, you're evolving!! I love this one. It's very catchy, right from the beginning. So simple and sweet, with an unspoken promise. Loved it!

[Sarah]

Aww this is so sweet, upbeat, and romantic! ^__^ Captures the innocence of young love. Also props for including Starbucks, which is fantastic. :P Great job! ^___^