Hearts Collide

 

As the sun sets

And the moon starts to rise

My heart starts to race

As I look in your eyes

 

We start to kiss

As our hearts collide

Feel the burn

From deep inside

 

A desire so strong

A love so true

Captured in this moment

Just me and you

 

As we sit

And take it all in

Feeling the love

That has no end

Reviews

[allwrite]

What a beautiful poem, Brandon. Very nice.

[Sarah]

This is simple & sweet, and talks of love uncorrupted by turmoil & time. I really love the symbolism of the sun & the moon in the first stanza, and also the rhyme scheme. (: Very nice!

[Ale Blevins]

so beautiful! its a wonderful love poem!

[Kae Martyndale]

This is a sweet poem. Well done.

[Seriana]

So sweet Brandon! Great job. :)

[Pinky]

Simply sweet.... Awesome form and flow and rhyme...I enjoyed reading it... Good work!

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

I love it. You made my heart melt. Who ever you write these love poems for is surely a lucky one. This poem was simply magnificent !

[forfila]

This is good Brandon, I like the direction and love in this poem. Nice work..

Matthew