Dream Theater "A Dance of Nightmares"

Dream Theater "A Dance of Nightmares"

A Poem by Brandon Dunbar
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Another sequence of Dream Theater

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Come one , come all
Dream theater has begun
For this night only
You'll soon feel the urge to run

As the doors start to open
And the crowd gets a peek
They had no idea of what's lurking
In this cruel game of hide n' seek

Smiles and dancing fill the room
Cares start to fade away
Music drowns out the cries
Things would forever change this day

Out from the shadows
A creature slowly appears
Dripping with blood on its fangs
Seems to be the epitome of fear

Crowd runs for the doors
Getting picked off one by one
It was at this moment I remembered
I am carrying a gun

Unholster my weapon
Fire a shot in the air
I've now got it's attention
I can feel it's evil glare

It starts to charge at me
With a full head of steam
As I start to pull the trigger
I wake up from the terrible dream

© 2025 Brandon Dunbar


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Stephen King would like this. The Monster, the lack of closure at the end allows for the monster to come back in another dream.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds frightening. I think the monster might have been Trump.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Whoa, that was intense! Like a nightmare wrapped in poetry ,dark, vivid, and gripping. Gave me chills and goosebumps!



Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! quite a dream... glad you awakened when you did...very vivid dreams...
Thank you for sharing,
Warmly, B

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the concept of waking up abruptly.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 18, 2025
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Brandon Dunbar
Brandon Dunbar

Phoenix, AZ



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Well to start off, I just started writing a little while back. I just decided to write one day out of pure boredom. Well I ended up writing 2 poems that day, and I got a very good response from them. .. more..