Your Wall

I see the suffering
In your eyes
I feel your pain
As it starts to arise

Wall is built tough
So nobody can break
Through to your heart
You wont let them take

Hurt before
But never again
Trust in nobody
Even before it begins

Say all the things
To make it quite clear
I'm not like the rest
Please trust me my dear

Things will be different
Im sure you've heard it before
What more can I say
Than what is true love for?

I will be waiting
Till you feel its time
To let me into your life

And let the light shine

Reviews

[Lady V]

Beautiful piece. That big wall is our safe guard from not only the pain from others but the pain we put ourselves through as well. It's a learned trait that we pick up over the years. Thank you for the read request.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[qaralynn]

I absolutely love this one!! great work!!

[Elizabeth]

The sentiment in this piece is so very true. I hope you showed this to the person for whom it was intended. :) Nicely done.

[Legion]

Nicely done. Not sure, but "arise" might need to be changed to "rise". You might be right though. Will have to check on it the way it is used in that line. Anyway, good write. Kudos.

[Manda]

awww! wonderful piece you have written here!

[SarahCortland]

I really love this! it's great