Love Lost

about a girl that i loved falling for another guy and then breaking up with me and then i talk about the problems i had after.

 

 

  

Waiting for the one phone call. Never regretting saying I love you to you and how I would jump in front of a bullet to save you. The love that lasted only a short time but left such a hazardous effect on me, and to you. You’re the air that I breathe and the sun that warms me. Watching you fall. But it is not me to catch you and I feel asif I was let down and pushed down and I feel no longer to stand and to be there. Disgraced as a handicap. Got me hooked to a spinal tap. Suffocating the
world with plastic wrap. She got me to fall for her booby trap. Clapping for an encore. Wrapping my heart in bubble wrapping cause its been warned of war. Suffocating from the core. Left my heart on the ocean floor. Sore as if we had another Trojan war to bore me. But no. no man has ventured past no man’s land as if it was their last. Blast me back to the past with that trip from that s**t that was passed back. Thoughts of you have been drugged and drowned by a beer can. I’m just another dead modified American man has died because of the hour glass of sand. The wealthy man has been killed for-he-is-the-one-at-doubt. F**k it. Get high…..and screw the rest man.

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

I enjoyed this. Love can be the hardest thing to go through and when you write about love a lot of people understand and have felt what you have.

[LostCauze[:P]]

By any chance do i know this person :P. Alright like the girl said below, a constant spilling of emotions and the flow kept it going and going throughout. Only problem is one of the sentences kind of went off the page. Try to fix that, either way i really enjoyed it dude. Keep writing.

[Erin]

an instantaneous spilling of thoughts and emotions no holds.
awesome, in the way the word is supposed to be used.