...

just... yea

feeling so blank

twisting eyes, 

crossing and spinning,

cant see whats in front of me

falling, falling, falling

fallen.

needing, wanting, craving, begging,

for what?

confused, alone, cold 

like frost covered flowers,

wilting, wilting, wilting

dead.

sleepless nights

tired thoughts.

unable to think

unable to write

trying, trying, trying

can't.

the rest is just whatever

futile efforts.

turning to dust

thinking, thinking, thinking

bare.

imperfect, unfinished, unproductive

unacceptable.

missing paper and pencil
head swelling

trying to write,

blocked.

Author's Note

so uhm yea. writers block sucks :/ but i decided i had to write something, so i did lol. im not gonna fix it or go over it or anything cuz its like 5:20 am and i havent slept, however ur welcome to suggest any changes, drastic or tiny. i think ill sleep now xD

Reviews

[Hippy]

very nice a writers block yet turned out really cool i think

[PaperHearts]

Great write! Inspired and relatable. :) I liked your use of repetition, and thought that it perfectly captured the struggle and frustration associated with writers block. This was a really unique take on the idea, and was executed really well. I loved the line about the frost covered flowers! Beautiful imagery, as always.
~PaperHearts

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I haven't really been able to write much. I really liked this poem though. Thanks for sharing. :)

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"the rest is just whatever
futile efforts.
turning to dust
thinking, thinking, thinking
bare."

{jeez--this is a excellent free flowing poem--wow-really-magnificent!!!}

james:-)

[Dinesh Sairam]

As soon as I read it, I thought it would do good as a song (Singers/Song writers/Musicians are lucky people *sigh*). The repetition worked out well too. But as I said, this would feel better as a song :)

Keep writing.