All Alone

I doubt that this is very good, but I came up with it off the top of my head, and I think it's kind of cool

All Alone, In This World,

All Alone, For Ever More,

All Alone, For I Will Be,

All Alone, Forever You See,

I Will Always Be Alone,

All Alone, For No One Understands Me,

All Alone, I Don’t Want To Be,

All Alone, I Want Someone To Love Me,

But I Now See

That I Will Always Be

All Alone

In This World.

Reviews

[Jem Sagcal]

It's such a sad, dark poem. Being alone is never a nice thing to be. I can relate, for at times, I would think this way, but then I'll remember that there will always be people standing by me.

No one is ever alone in this world.

[luviva]

ohh.. the answer to your all alone is just open up to the world and it will open to you. trust me the friends you make in life will go with you anywhere and you wont be "all alone" loved it!!

[ShannielleFaith]

I personally am usually not a fan of rhyming, but I feel that you pulled it off well. I like the flow. It kind of reminds me of a haunting nursery rhyme. Lovely, simple, and relatable.

[Erinne S.]

I really liked this! You wrote it well, it flowed nice and your wording was put together well. Great job!

~Erinne

[scripted]

GREAT POEM i love that i can relate to what this poems says!!!

[Elizabeth Em]

I agree with Damien! I like this. =)

[Damien Davison]

I actually thought it had amazing flow, spoken out it sounds pretty good!

[}Echo{]

Thanks! :) Thanks for reviewing! :D

[marie]

great job, could use some polishing but i think you have a good base in this :)

[Kyle Sky]

Ever since I became a fan of Edgar Allan Poe, I read ever more as nevermore as from his poem "The Raven". So this poem reminded me of my favorite poet. Not only in the words ever more but in it's mood. Also, This reminds me of the poem Alone by Edgar allan poe.It has the same concept but Edgar Allan Poe's was more deep in its writing and much stronger. Still, your poem is a decent piece in all its dark loveliness.