I'm Sorry...

Yeah...

 

I promised you I’d stop…

That I’d never do it again…

But couldn’t take this s**t,

So I broke my promise again…

 

I’m sorry…

I'm really sorry...

 

It’s pointless,

It’s stupid,

I have no reason to live,

It’s obvious I can’t stop,

So maybe I’ll just put it to an end…

 

I’m Sorry...

 

Do you hate me?

Am I hopeless?

Am I all alone?

Do you think everyone would be

So much better off

If I was gone?

 

I’m sorry…

 

I promise you

I’ll stop,

That I’ll never do it again,

It may take a while,

But I hope you’ll love me to the end…

 

I’m sorry…

I'm really sorry...

Reviews

[Sir Jaykom]

Good read. I enjoyed it.

[}Echo{]

Thanks. :)

[Riley Mistwood]

very powerful. great job

[}Echo{]

Thanks. :)

[Christopher J]

I know this is meant to be for reviews but hey, i'll ask the quesiton anyway. Where did the inspiration for this come from? I like it.

[}Echo{]

The inspiration for this poem came from the other day when me and my best friend got in a huge fight, and he screamed that he hated me, and told me if I didn't stop something he would never speak to me again, so... yeah... Thanks. :)

[scripted]

i love the rythym its filled with emotion good job!!!

[}Echo{]

Thanks. :)