In the Dark

A poem....

In the dark

Of my room,

I sit alone,

Crying,

I’m all alone,

I have no one,

I’m a freak, they tell me,

I look down at the blood

Pouring from my arm,

I look at the scars from

Many times before,

I know I need help,

I know I need to stop,

But can’t when I don’t have your love

To hold me…

Reviews

[luviva]

OHHH.......... thats so nice and emotionally strong! loved it

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Thanks. :)

[Kyle Sky]

the words was simple yet it was able to induce a strong mood into the reader. Great piece.

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Thank you! :)

[Sir Jaykom]

Brief but speaks volumes. Like how the last sentences draws everything in smoothly. Nice work.

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Thank you! :)

[Riley Mistwood]

wow. powerful. you really feel for the girl in the poem. good job