Enmity

Enmity

A Poem by oranges_melt
"

Hate me.

"

Please don't trust me,

I might make you hate me,

because I'm not like you,

you may not see me.

don't judge me, don't hate it,

I like how you forgave it.

But when I made the mistake

you just up and take it.

You break it, you cut it,

you make me wanna trust it,

but tonight I'm gonna hate it

because it makes you hate me.

Enmity.  Enmity.  You feel like

enmity.  your aroma is

Enmity.

You hate it.  Your enmity.

You judge me, you hate me,

but one day you will see,

I won't be, I love me,

so forgive me,

if I trust me.

© 2009 oranges_melt


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Meh
Hate. What a strong emotion, and you capture it perfectly, like a still picture taken by a camara. Keep up the good writing and work! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 18, 2009

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oranges_melt
oranges_melt

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