Letters^

The letter came

In a glass bottle

I wondered

What it said

Who was smart enough

To send it in such a manner

But then I realized

Our love sent it

He missed me

I missed him

He wrote it 

And said

"God if we honestly miss each other

it will find a way to her, my love"

So it did

And it read

My dearest

My love

I couldn't find another way

So here it is

I missed you

I love you

I will see you soon

Reviews

[R. S.]

I love the poem; and the idea that it came in a bottle with a message that proves that they missed each other. But I felt it was hard to decode "it will find a way to her" it could be improved by replacing it with "this will find a way to her" or "this will find a way to you" depending if that message is written in the letter (meant for 'her' to read) or if he is praying to God while holding the bottle and sending it off to 'her.'

Overall I loved the poem

[Irenic]

a very beautiful poem written in a beautiful way :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story described in the poem. Love is never forgotten. Just resting, waiting for reason to be rebirth. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rebecca Garber]

I thought this poem really came from the heart. I thought it was confusing at first, when I reread it I found it kind of nice. Please don't take that in the wrong way I have a huge headache.

[Anjali]

Dear Nony,

I loved to read this poem written by you. It gives me hope and happiness that true love still exists. It reminded me of the story I left reading long ago, "A message in a bottle". I guess, I will have to complete reading it.

I liked the way you mentioned about sending letter to the one you loved but drifted apart with time. Well done.

[XO Vee]

thank you so much

[Hebe]

.....everyone wants to find a message in a bottle... you capture that

[Bala Gorthi]

I loved reading this write. Love is the most powerful thing . If the bond is strong distance doesn't matter.
Attachment can make a desire strong so strong that it can break all barriers to to reach one' love.
My husband feels that our son is his father himself because my son was born after his fathers' death.. It is his love for his father that he sees him in our son.Indians believe that souls do not die and they try be born to people whom they love. This can one reason he thinks like that..
But do believe that love, attachment and thick bond can make anything possible..
This is a beautiful poem.. It ends on hopeful note so heart feels light here.
Thanks for sharing this one. Keep sharing...

[XO Vee]

Thats amazing that you connected your own experience into my poetry and I definitely believe that as well. Like my father passed 2 years ago and he is, next to my mom, the most important person in my life. And now I'm in a relationship that I feel he helped me find. I see little things in my boyfriend that make me say "damn he is looking over me!" Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Bala Gorthi]

I can vouch that. If their blessings can work wonders. Love never dies.
I wish the best for you.

[Paul Bell]

Now that's my kind of message.
Hope it's sooner than later.

[M.A.]

This piece flows very well through the readers mind. The message of love is beautiful. The carefully chosen words brings this piece to life before the readers eyes. Thank you for sharing.

[Davidgeo]

I like the "message in a bottle" format you have going on here. The structure is even visually appealing, looks almost like a bottle itself.

Very well crafted.