Tea

As soon as he was through the door,

He wrapped me in his arms.

With one kiss he begged for more.

And though I knew it did me harm,

I took him lightly by the hand,

And led him quickly up the stairs.

He held me tightly, told me nothings and,

he coolly brushed aside my hair.

Then he pulled me to the bed,

Clothes were strewn across the floor,

My fingers coiled around his head,

And yet still he wanted more.

It felt like hours when we'd done,

When breathlessly he turned to me.

I panted, wet with fun:

"How about a cup of tea?"

Reviews

[A hare off]

Sure, cream and sugar please. :) The first time I read through this Alias, I didn't even realize it rhymed. And to me that is a good thing. It means the rhymes were flawless and that is what I found the second time around. This is a sensually beautiful and well written poetic encounter. Oh, and the ending made me smile.

[WritersBlock]

Imaginative, provocative, clean.. with a smudge of erotic-ness. (Is that the word?)

[matrixmark]

Great rhymes and a great poem. The more I read this piece, the more passion comes through. This may have been short but it really says quite a lot.

Loved the tea ending.

Mark.

[isus]

cool poem and great end, i like it very much. greetings :))

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

"How about a cup of coffee?" lol I don't drink tea but enjoyed the words of your poem :)

[Pete]

Guess I will have something else to think about next time I'm sipping a cup. My Earl Grey & Lipton's will never be the same. Nice job.

[AaronFreitas]

Where can I find a woman as awesome as her! haha your words give me this vision of two with the most amazing connection... just can't get enough of each other. I enjoyed your work :)

[Archos]

There is something very characteristic about your poetry. I can't describe it, (If I were to ty, I'd say that it's the way I'm never sure if you are describing something sombre and grim, or the exact opposite. Yep, I guess it's the uncertainity) but I really like it.

[Alias]

Wow thank-you, that means a lot. I don't usually write with themes in mind, I just write what happens to me in the form it occurs to me, but I think you're right about the sombre/grim juxtaposition (though unintentional) - thanks for your review!

[Candace]

lovely! great flow and much excitment

[Jessalynn]

Awesome poem, fun and so skillfully unfurled. Great piece!!