But I love you

Its about a lover whos left, or died. Take your pick and see how the poems mood changes between both.

It's your dreams,

And your world,

That I wake for,

 

It's your smile,

And your eyes,

That I breath for,

 

And it's your smell,

And your touch,

That I'd die for,

 

I sing to you,

A song,

Like no other,

 

I look for you,

In the dark,

Waiting to see you,

 

I feel for you,

Your touch,

Needing to hold you,

 

And I yell for you,

In the silence,

Just to hear your name,

 

You're my days,

And Nights,

So I cry for you,

 

You're my hearts,

Leading path,

So I follow you,

 

But you've strayed,

Away from me,

And I die for you,

 

You've left me,

Alone,

And I wait for you,

 

To see you

Again,

And I sing to you,

 

But your voice,

I dont hear,

So I sigh for you,

 

For I know that,

You're gone,

But I love you.

Reviews

[shinybluestars03]

Wow, another fantastic poem.
What you wrote is something i would
hear from someone i love very much.
I especially enjoyed that last 2 paragraphs.
Thanks for sharing once again
i shall keep on reading more of your work.

Best wishes

[Lindsay.]

I can really, really, really relate to this poem right now.

It kind of made me want to cry.

And with every stanza I could see myself in it more and more.

Like with: "You're my days,
And Nights,
So I cry for you,"

Right now, I can't stop crying because of a guy.

But really, I just want to say that this is beautiful. And I'm glad you have written it.

[lauren emily]

I can relate to this right now..but hopefully things will get better.
You did a great job with capturing the feeling of loss in this, overall it's a really great poem.
Keep up the good work,
Lauren