Blind

Inspired by my disengrating vision

 

Groping in the dark.

Finding my way into the light.

Eyes gradually falling into the sinful fog.

A wall stood before me

A wall of traumatically inexplicable and prurient blackness.

Whose dimensions couldn’t be measured.

Seeing beauty itself

with only my cold fingers to feel.

Witnessing colors

with only but my ears to heed.

With a lifetime’s worth of savor

I am left to suffer this gift…

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This has to be one of the most heart wrenching and beautiful pieces of writing that I have ever read.
The imagery is very striking and appealing.
"Eyes gradually falling into the sinful fog." - It's not very often when we read something so outstanding.
I simply loved this piece of writing, its very descriptive and beautiful :-)
I will surely add it to my favorites.

[Aussie]

So descriptive... Marvelous imagery as well.
Another great write(:

[Indigo Blue Skies]

I like this - the descriptions really paint the picture clearly. I feel like I'm right there in the poem.

[theunknownchick]

AWESOME! :D Good Job. I like it =)