regret

i really want to know what people think of this, PLEASE review

triggering affection

begging me to not leave, stay apart of this collection 

and i gotta say it's the part of my mind's reflection

i'm coming to feel regret

i didnt mean to make you upset

you fall and i see the shame

all i think is i'm the one to blame

i wanted to tell you that i care

i know i gave you quite a scare

--unfinished-

Author's Note

ignore spelling and such

Reviews

[Elanra]

Hmmm... I am not quite sure I understood what you wanted us to understand from this. Its a little raw but for such a short poem it has really good rhymes... Its just a bit unclear the way it is... But besides that its a good try. You should keep writing cus you have potencial...

Kudos! ^_^