The Feeling

The feeling that made me love you forever.
Is no longer there,
like you ever cared.
 
The feeling inside me feels broken to pieces.
The feeling that shattered,
But to you never mattered.
 
The feeling inside me thats completely empty.
The feeling i needed,
But you never succeeded
 
The feeling inside me strikes me like lightning.
It strikes me so deeply,
damaged completely.

Reviews

[MusicMartyrs]

this is very sad but you rhyme very well :)
a beautiful write :)

[XxLovexLuckyxX]

Awh Steph I'm pretty sure I have a copy of this from last years teen news paper and it's taped on my wall. A great write! I always tell you I wish I could write like you, and this time is no different. I wish. I could. Write. Like you :)