I have been

wasting life watching space grow
from the cracks in the pavement
that I made with my heart far
too long ago

I'm tired of nursing
this wound back
to health

I can hear it beat
but I can't feel it

for that,
I'm far too happy

as for the rest,
I'm far too miserable


remember when
you'd call me
beautiful
without
ever
seeing
my
face

I think I miss
that the most




sometimes it's just painful
to know that you were
never beautiful like that


so much so,
it left cracks.

Reviews

[terry smith]

I know your pain!! If you read some of my work you will understand, Very good writing..am a fan.

[Lightfalls]

"remember when
you'd call me
beautiful
without
ever
seeing
my
face

I think I miss
that the most"

Wow this really is a beautiful piece, I wish I could write like THIS. I almost cried when I read this. Very descriptive without being too literal, it paints a clear image. Very nice isn't a good way to describe this, but I can't do it justice.

[Antonio Valentino]

People and their opinions come and go, what matters is knowing yourself that you are a beautiful person inside.

This was great, wonderful job.
Antonio :)