Book of Memories

Every person you meet is a part of a book of memory,

i can remember the very first day i met him,

he was sitting there and talking to his friends,

when i walked in it all seem to end,

as he stared,

we got together there,

it ended as soon as it started,

love deceived me and was full of lies,

it loves to see you fall in to it then crash and burn on the way out,

every person is part of a book of memories,

everyone is remembered by someone,

if by love,lost,chance or connection everyone is remembered by someone,

don't believe your erasable.

Reviews

[J. Marc]

Nice poem actually for it gives the reader the special feeling and hope that he or she could actually make a greater impact in life! Indeed, everyone is struggling to get out of anonymity and to affirm oneself positively to others. I like how you described the encounter with "him". I was a bit taken aback with the line about love and deceit. That was a good management of feelings that could augurs further great works.

Thank you for giving us a worthwhile advise about ourselves!

[Alexander W. Quinn]

I love the last 2 lines of this piece; it's a great message that more people need to hear and belive in. :)

[SweetPeachesAlways]

" don't believe your erasable. "
I not only believe I am erasable, I think I am replaceable, untraceable, and completely nonexistent at times.
Good write.

every person is part of a book of memories,
everyone is remembered by someone,

You've caught me in a melancholy frame of mind today...but I still like your writing.

[None]

Very true and your poem really is thought provoking. Your poem lets the reader into your world and feels your pain. Well written and I like your strong ending: "if by love,lost,chance or connection everyone is remembered by someone, don't believe your erasable."