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you broke my heart,

torn it to shreds,

now i can't get you out of my head;

everything i look at give me a memory,

i wanna feel you holding me.

i try and try to forget you,

but then i cry,

i hate you so much,

but my heart choses to love you.

then i think its over,

and try to get with someone new,

you come back and break my heart anew.

i want you here holding me for ever and always,

not just tonight,

don't leave me broken,

don't leave me here, ALONE AGAIN!!!

take this pain away and don't just leave me heart shattered in the wind!!!

DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE!!

Reviews

[poetsblade]

personal agony....fresh and new....you feel it

[Alexander W. Quinn]

You convey your emotions very well, and parts of this piece can almost be sung in your head while you read it. Very powerful and honest.

[Belinda Rice]

i know how you feel with this poem i had some one leave me of 10 years and thats how i felt to a t.......great write i can relate very well to it...