2 short poems.

these are 2 very short poems. that i linked together. but i don't know if they really fit.

love is lost,

trust is broken,

its sad but true,

i love you.

 

love locked away,

now covered with pain,

in my heart it only rains,

curing my pain.

 

 

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Short and sweet. You have a grammar error in the third line, you need an apostrophe in "its" but otherwise it's a good little emotional poem.

[Michael V]

Nice. It was a sweet little read that warms the heart, well done.

[Brenda Sue]

They do go together. Very well written. Great job.