I'll take that

This is my insight when it comes to social issues. Nothing personally offensive to anyone- it's just my chosen style and I believe it's wiser than trusting everyone. This is freestyle writing.

I'll take that

When I met you;

I generously gave you a heart and a half.

Fill it up, act the lies

For I love fantasy and beyond before it dies.

 

I knew it would end

I just didn’t know how.

Impress me, stranger,

For I can’t stay too long

It would hurt much more

Let’s just pretend it’s real for a while-

A memory for me and you

I'll take that.

Would you?

Author's Note

Comment on what you think could be improved :)

Reviews

[Emily]

I liked it!
The only thing I would improve is maybe describe more of what the person goes though.
Keep up the great work!!

[The Waterlily Pad]

Thanks, I'll maybe consider that. 💕