Drowning

A time of life.

This is it,

i'm almost dead.

Inside a small, icy sea,

where my story ends, and already read.

I'm losing air,

in my tiny, hopeless lung.

Pull me up,

for this is already sung.

I feel a tug on my arm,

hairless and strong,

this might be,

my new life song.

I'm pulled up,

and I smile.

I almost cried,

but atleast I wasn't in denial.

Reviews

[sette]

acceptance is the most important thing. it will take time to heal the pain

[davey]

Yes. If not importance, it's love. You need to love someone and ACCEPT them for who they are. It takes time for them to just drop in ice cold water, and heal after saved.

[sette]

that is so true

[Evan M.]

this is very well written i enjoy the feeling and heart put behind it. keep writing like this i implore you

[Morgan Bland]

Very beautifully written.

[davey]

Thank you. This may have took me a while, but people like you are people who inspire me to make poems. I really appreciate the compliment, and one question. Would you like to be friends on here?

[Morgan Bland]

You are very welcome.
Sure :)

[Justin]

Amazing job!!!! Very emotional, the presentation was very good, great job 😃

[davey]

Thank you so much, Justin. You are very swell. I accepted your friend request. Mind sharing this to others?

Thank you! -Broken_Hearts

[Justin]

Your welcome thanks for letting me read it!!!

[davey]

You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoy the poem.

[Justin]

I hope u check out my writing!!!