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Poetry



Am I stupid

Am I a book that dosent get recognized for recommendation am I somone to be overlooked wrong
And a person with no feelings that are surrounded by compassion
Am I somthing to be thrown away and not to be loved
Am I somthing not to last for a life time.
Am I somome who dose reach all humanity society
Am I nothing Am I not a person at all.
Am I a broken item that won't be looked for ever in this life time.https://pin.it/601C6WXah

Reviews

[Twilight]

This seems to raise a variety of pertinent questions, pondered by both young and old. We could take the book symbolism, to help answer a few of those in part. Once you know your basic outlook or goals, at least your book would then have an introduction or foreward.

The chapters themselves, should be filled with life experiences; as you experiment and figure out what works best for you?

Sadly, this piece references someone who feels unloved and has difficulty fitting in with society. But, try not to lose hope and never give up.

Quite brave too, to open up in such a way here; about what ails you. And, it's honest too. That bravery, openness and honesty; are positive character traits in themselves. So, don't lose sight of that basic truth.

[Michael Sun Bear]

I had wanted to respond to The Secret of Me by saying She has a light that shines in her writing! but apparently the Review function is blocked for that poem. You are as young as I am old. I know you are not stupid, nor are you permanently any of the other conditions described here in this poem. I hope you find the perfect person for whom you may last for a lifetime. I lingered over your last line. Many of us are broken at some point in our lives; some heal stronger, some heal crooked, some never heal. Keep writing. I wish I had a Time Machine to see your poems at 30, at 50, at 70.

[destiny renteria]

The time travel part? what do u mean for this

[Michael Sun Bear]

Your profile was written when you were, or are now, 18 years old. Your writing interests me enough, that I would like to see what you will be writing in the decades to come, after life has kicked you around some. However I am 74; without a Time Machine I probably won’t be reading your work 20, 30,40,50 years from now.

[Lorry]

I like the first lime of this and am picturing an Amazon bot exploding while trying to figure out what other people bought who also bought you/this, followed by a row of question marks, as if the bot just shrugged and moved on.
I don't think it's stupid. Another way of looking at it is unique. Undefined in a world where people think doing or being popular is the way to be.
I never understood how everyone wants to be unique but think fitting into proper labels and stereotypes is the way to go about it.
I finally gave up trying to label myself when I began labelling myself as "nuttier than an explosion in a snickers factory."
I mean okay, I get some funny looks when describing myself as that in an interview or official form, but I did find out one thing I'll never forget... that if you can say that about yourself, then what others think or say seems to hurt or stick less.
Maybe it's old age, but the answers to life's questions like these matter less and less as life keeps going on and while they can hurt when you're in amongst it, they also help to find the you you are more comfortable with.
I remember long ago writing a piece like this that had the line "am I the unexpected item in the bagging area?" But reading it now makes me smile, knowing I am as no matter whether alone or at the front of the queue, I always ask the self checkout how it's doing or if it has any plans for the weekend. I do it smiling in the knowledge that whoever overhears me will be shaking there head at me, as I obliviously stroll out the store! 😃

[destiny renteria]

Thank you so much for this you're truly inspiring.
I was in my feelings and decided to write what was not said. but again thank you so much for that its lovely.

[Lorry]

You're welcome.

[destiny renteria]

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