Betrayed

A poem I wrote when I was in high school

Alone

immersed in rain

Thinking
about all the pain 

Walking

like a zombie to no where

Seriously

you really don't care

Beer

that's all you drink

Girlfriend

what she thinks you think

Me

just a pain and a liar

Anger

its what I feel like a furious fire

Tears

fall down my face

Memories

disappear from my home, this place

You 
pick her over me

I

really don't want to be believe

Why

she lies, I'm not really that bad.

Please

Just see through her because I love you

Dad

Reviews

[Ian H Morrison]

oh wow this is so wonderful it is so strong in its writing and then the twist at the end is fantastic wonderful i love your work hun keep it up