Her Eyes...

werdd

her eyes, they shine young and beautiful
she looks at me but i feel pitiful
there's not much point trying
itll only end up with me crying
her eyes, they shine young and beautiful

her body, it's young and beautiful
she looks at me but i feel pitiful
am i just wasting my time?
is wasting my time a crime?
her eyes, they shine young and beautiful

is it possible her personality resembles her features?
or is she like most angels.. resembling a creature..
either way, i'll be hurt in the end
i don't have the time for my heart to mend
but her eyes... they shine so young and beautiful

Reviews

[Carissa]

i love this poem. your serious writings always pull people in and leave the writer (or listener) begging for more. you use simple words to describe complex emotions and you do a great job. keep up the good work lou!

[sarahkatherine]

This all rhymes really well.
Goooood job.
Your talented.