LESSONS FROM YOU

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He taught me how to love,

By bringing all things new.

He said  I can be loved

And I learn to love him too.

 

He taught me how to fight

In every trouble that would come.

He said no need to hide

'Cause there's a solution when there's a problem.

 

But I never thought that I

Would learn to hate him too.

And now that the time has come,

I know what to do.

 

With the lesson I learned from him,

I learned how to fight

.I tried to forgive,

And revive our love again.

Reviews

[Signet]

Wow... This one is lovely... I can relate to it and that's what is the most beautiful thing... anyone can relate to it! I love the paraghraph-
'He taught me how to love,
By bringing all things new.
He said I can be loved
And I learn to love him too.'
Keep up the good work :)
Signet

[John Doeadeer (Pen name..]

You got the prosaic view here. I can see what you're tryin to tell people.. I KNOW. well keep that up kid because I like your style, you're not much into lyircal as I am.

[Satellite Heart]

This is beautiful. I loved it! I can really relate. Great Work. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Love is a hard lesson to learn. If we are lucky we become smarter.
Coyote

[Clayman]

Interesting poem, i love it. Kind of a religious tone to it. In the first stanza you mean "learnt" not learn and overall i think this was a powerful piece that said alot in a few words. :)